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What’s Wrong With This Headline?

I know we all see mistakes in grammar in articles we read. But I can't believe some of the things I read from paid "journalists." I guess some really don't care at all - which is sad.

 

Here's the headline:  

 

Princess Eugenie Steps Out for the First Time Since Giving Birth on the Red Carpet with Sister Princess Beatrice

 

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Re: What’s Wrong With This Headline?

@beach-mom I completely agree--it's ridiculous!  

 

This is the headline from a local news story in my area:

 

"Vehicle Wanted for Questioning in Homicide Investigation"...What? The article went on to state that "the vehicle AND the occupant are wanted for questioning"--yeah, that clears things up!

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Re: What’s Wrong With This Headline?

She's on the red carpet with a NUN????     

 

 

(Yeah, I also got the "first" gramatical boo boo...)

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Re: What’s Wrong With This Headline?

@beach-mom When I see stuff like that I figure the writer doesn't know a thing about sentence structure or word usage.

 

Imagine giving birth on a red carpet LOL.

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Re: What’s Wrong With This Headline?

The birth on the red carpet didn't make my local news.....darn!

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Re: What’s Wrong With This Headline?

Poor use of grammar, makes me cringe.

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Re: What’s Wrong With This Headline?

 


@beach-mom wrote:

I know we all see mistakes in grammar in articles we read. But I can't believe some of the things I read from paid "journalists." I guess some really don't care at all - which is sad.

 

Here's the headline:  

 

Princess Eugenie Steps Out for the First Time Since Giving Birth on the Red Carpet with Sister Princess Beatrice

@beach-mom.  That must have been a sight to behold.  Wonder if the had any privacy?


 

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@Desertdi wrote:

She's on the red carpet with a NUN????     

 

 

(Yeah, I also got the "first" gramatical boo boo...)


💂  Is " Sister Princess" the British equivalent of "Mother Superior?"

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Re: What’s Wrong With This Headline?

 Does anyone know if the journalist who wrote the article also wrote the headline, or is someone else charged with writing it so that the words fit the available space?

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Re: What’s Wrong With This Headline?

Yikes!  Giving birth on the red carpet with her sister!