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I like it very much. It captures the beauty of silence.

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I write my sensory experiences------TY, scottie
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On 6/18/2014 sylviahomeatlast said: I try to create my OWN cliches

Well...that would be the exact opposite of ""cliche"".

Money doesn't talk; it swears. --Bob Dylan
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if you used mine, that would be cliche----another fact: writers are well known stealers-----I completely avoid that
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by that, I mean a phrase, a word in context, even an entire line---I was trained to be original, even if it's bad---and I have lots of those. :-D
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It's a beautiful poem, Sylviahomeatlast. It reminded me of our recent vacation to the beach.