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Re: An Ode to Snow- Celestial Diamonds

I love your writing style @Enufstuff .  Beautiful poem!

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Re: An Ode to Snow- Celestial Diamonds


@Enufstuff wrote:

@cheriereReally, I don't mind sharing. As long as you don't publish it with your name.


Of course, I'd NEVER do anything like that.  I know my family will enjoy it is why I wanted to make sure I could find it.  Thanks, I really appreciate it.😊💝💕

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Re: An Ode to Snow- Celestial Diamonds

@gulf coast girl   Thank you very much.

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Re: An Ode to Snow- Celestial Diamonds

@Citrine1   Thank you so much.

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Re: An Ode to Snow- Celestial Diamonds

So glad you are sharing these gems, @Enufstuff !

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Re: An Ode to Snow- Celestial Diamonds

@Enufstuff  To think that a sleepless night brought such a  beautiful poem to your mind! I love the image of vines covered in lace snow.  That lines "alabaster sculptures stood guard on the lawn.  Where bushes were seen on the previous dawn" such a beautiful set of lines and I can see the snow covered bushes in my mind.  Rhyming "sky" with "snow piled high"- I like that a lot. I really like how you described the pine boughs bending underneath the weight of the snow- I can picture that so clearly.  Wow! You mentioned that your children haven't read your poems, I think that you should show them your beautiful poetry- it really is a joy to read.  I also think that you could compile them into a book and self publish- you can even publish them under a penname if you like! Anyways, your poems are really so very ;ovely and thank you for publishing them on these forums.  Enufstuff, you've got the right stuff! Smiley Happy