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Watch out!!! Poem

sylviahomeatlast — Tue, 18 Nov 2014 21:08:12 GMT

Homage to Lucille Clifton

This is fiction

Thought about this during the recent discussions

Written in 2006

(note: spelling modified)

Thanks, Lucille Clifton, for Letting Me Love My But

This is a woman but--no flat, no shape, no skinny excuse for a but--

curves out and in like apples, ripe for pickin'--

my but looks hot--

it's a fine but--whit and tight and just enough

jiggle!

rear view fills out your focus--snap! shot!

****

I can dance this but hard--

and it likes it!

from the back side it's one young but--

no tight as but a tush Lucille would give a thumbs up--

****

if this but had a face,

it would be smilin'!

****

shimmy shimmy

Re: Watch out!!! Poem

chrystaltree — Tue, 18 Nov 2014 21:12:09 GMT

....put the cooking sherry away and make a pot of strong coffee. You'll be okay...lol

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JuJu Squeezie — Tue, 18 Nov 2014 21:12:24 GMT

This is my poem~

I see your hiney,

It's big and shiny.

If you don't hide it,

I just might bite it.

Re: Watch out!!! Poem

sylviahomeatlast — Tue, 18 Nov 2014 21:14:05 GMT

fun to say, write outrageous words love it!

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minkbunny — Tue, 18 Nov 2014 21:17:44 GMT

It is admirable to see a woman who appreciates her assets

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sylviahomeatlast — Tue, 18 Nov 2014 21:22:29 GMT

In my RL, it's one of those flat, little, but I can dream. Cutie-pie baby one

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JuJu Squeezie — Tue, 18 Nov 2014 21:24:31 GMT

Babies are so perfect. I love them.

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sylviahomeatlast — Tue, 18 Nov 2014 21:28:14 GMT

We are waiting for a new grandbaby in 2 weeks

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QueenDanceALot — Tue, 18 Nov 2014 21:29:13 GMT

Ode to my Butt

Heart Shaped Bottom make em sigh

Bunnies wrestlin neath a blanket make em high

Round and round they go

Where they stoppin nobody know

I'm gonna take em Higher

Boom Laka Laka Laka, Boom Laka Laka Laka

BOOM.

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JuJu Squeezie — Tue, 18 Nov 2014 21:30:00 GMT

Congrats Sylvia, wishing a very healthy happy baby!

I have 2 grandsons age 1 and 2 and 1 granddaughter age 15

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sylviahomeatlast — Tue, 18 Nov 2014 21:33:31 GMT

I knew you all were up for this hilarity!!!

Thank you, JuJu (may I call you by your first name?) I hope we are fortunate to have more too

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sylviahomeatlast — Tue, 18 Nov 2014 21:33:59 GMT

My Humps

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JuJu Squeezie — Tue, 18 Nov 2014 21:41:39 GMT

Sure Sylvia call me Juju anytime. So your new bundle could really come any time now? Have you heard if you have a boy or girl? Have you been drooling over baby outfits every where you shop? Are you going to be close by?

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minkbunny — Tue, 18 Nov 2014 21:44:16 GMT

On 11/18/2014 sylviahomeatlast said:
We are waiting for a new grandbaby in 2 weeks

Oh, my goodness. That is wonderful.

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sylviahomeatlast — Tue, 18 Nov 2014 21:44:38 GMT

Interestingly, the new parents are doing this the old fashioned way, they don't know who baby is yet. Their doctor hasn't even let it slip. I can hardly wait. I've bought some non-gender specific things so far

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Marianne1 — Tue, 18 Nov 2014 21:45:45 GMT

So, I will preface this post with I am exhausted-- I slept very little last night and gave up at 2 this morning and got up to study before my exam...

anyway, I read the title of this thread as Watch out!! Por*n, not poem

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JuJu Squeezie — Tue, 18 Nov 2014 21:47:24 GMT

I think that's a great surprise, I like it that way. Well I know this baby will have plenty of yellow, mint and white to wear and I do wish the very best and tons of excitement and joy to your family. Let us know when you get your hands on that baby!

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JuJu Squeezie — Tue, 18 Nov 2014 21:48:07 GMT

On 11/18/2014 Complicated said:
So, I will preface this post with I am exhausted-- I slept very little last night and gave up at 2 this morning and got up to study before my exam...

anyway, I read the title of this thread as Watch out!! Por*n, not poem

Oh no, a let down!

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minkbunny — Tue, 18 Nov 2014 21:49:51 GMT

On 11/18/2014 JuJu Squeezie said:
On 11/18/2014 Complicated said:
So, I will preface this post with I am exhausted-- I slept very little last night and gave up at 2 this morning and got up to study before my exam...

anyway, I read the title of this thread as Watch out!! Por*n, not poem

Oh no, a let down!

Yeah, that's a bummer. Get all hyped up, open the p*rn thread with great anticipation and it is - a freakin' poem

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sylviahomeatlast — Tue, 18 Nov 2014 21:49:53 GMT

On 11/18/2014 Complicated said:
So, I will preface this post with I am exhausted-- I slept very little last night and gave up at 2 this morning and got up to study before my exam...

anyway, I read the title of this thread as Watch out!! Por*n, not poem

Sylvia hardly ever writes pr*n just a touch bawdy. This little (gem) was written for an adjunct class in Poetry Writing and Dance. Moving the body stirs up the brain I hope your exam goes well.